Added: Sep 6, 2008
From: ShawtiiJWP
Duration: 0:27
ANNOUNCEMENTS: As my very outspoken friend would say, "I'd so do him!" (Kevin Pic). I love hearing what all y'all want to be! Those are some awesome professions! I just thought I'd let you guys know that I just had the BEST oatmeal raisin cookie in the world. It was orgasmic, pardon my reference. =] So for the question: What are your comments on the story? Like is it too boring, too slow? Does it need more drama? What is it missing? What are the good things? Any suggestions? To the story... RECAP: Nick and Sandy got caught committing their "fun deeds"... ***Kevin and Joe*** Kevin: (Tossing pasta in the cart) So you're appointment is set for tomorrow morning. I have a hunch but I'm no doctor. Joe: Thanks Kevin. You have no idea how amazing you are. Ooh, ravioli! (Tosses it in) Kevin: (Laughs) Only you. PA System: Kevin and Joe Jonas, please report to the security office. Kevin and Joe Jonas to the security office. Thank you. Kevin/Joe: Nick and Sandy. ***5 minutes later*** (They're all back in the car, groceries and all, scolding Nick and Sandy) Kevin: Seriously Nick, Code Blue? Do you realize that the entire off duty staff was in chaos? Joe: The fucking S.W.A.T. team was there because they thought there was a hostage situation. Kevin: Now we've been slapped with a $1,000 dollar fine, and that was them WARNING us. Joe: And Sandy, I know you're Nick's girlfriend, but that doesn't mean you have to be dumb enough to join him! Sandy: Sorry. Nick: Sorry. (They arrive at their new house and get settled) Joe: Ah, spiffy place we have here. I like it. Kevin: I knew you would. Nick will show you where your room is, your thing are already there. Nick: Come on Joe. Joe: Sweet. (They go) Kevin: It's kind of late Sandy. Call your parents and let them know you're crashing here. Sandy: Thank you Kevin. That's so nice of you. Kevin: Yeah, yeah. You're sleeping in the guest room, which is right next to mine. Two words: Paper Walls. So don't try me. Sandy: (Blushes) Yes sir. (Kevin goes to show her the guest room. Everyone puts their things away and goes to bed) ~~WHOA! So that's a pretty hefty fine! Who knew Code Blue was so serious? (I have no idea if that's what it means in the store. That's not what it means at the hospital) Chapter Tweleve is officially over. Phew! ~~
Channel: People
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Rating: 5.00 (10 ratings) Views: 1025' favoriteCount='2 Comments: 25
missydrama96 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - and, you need to start the next season of make it work. that was one of my favorite series, and you havent posted in foreva!!!
yvonnebrown613 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - love the kevin pic they stroys fine just needs a little more drama but it is great
marylovesjonas Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - llllllllllllllllllove it =]
ValerieLoveAye Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - Dang! Does Code Blue mean people are going to blow up the joint?! So serious! Why so serious?
NicoleMBlogs Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - wow
OJDjonasbrothersOJD Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - lol!!!! paper walls! MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!
kevinjonassocute Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - wow awsome please hurry cant wait!!!!!
SoccerChick231 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - ive done those "deeeds" nick and sandy have done hahaha except mine was code red!! code red!!
MrsTinaPoynter Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - Keep Posting :D Love it!
homeygirl411 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - u make me laugh a lot! and wats paper walls? anwayz i luved it!
vanessafangirl Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - u gotta make a new season of make it work!!! i loved that one!! lol and i love this one but it is a little slow lol and i love drama!!! lol =] anywayz awesome series love them!!! ♥
Piggles134 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - paper walls means the walls r really thin (like paper) so kevin can hear anything she (and nick) do in there lol. great chap!
ABheartsNJ Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - MORE MROE!
ashlygirl15 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - 2 words " LOVE IT!! " ;]
ashlygirl15 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - oh and dont forget MAKE MORE!! I SUPPORT YOUR STORIES!! THEIR AWESOME!
sayitallforkevinj Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - HA BHA HA ROTFL PAPER WALLS gosh did u read my moms mind seriously i had this dude over and shes like i can heart u outside DONT TRY ANYTHING the walls are like paper i can hear u i was creepy considering i didnt even know the dude some kid from her boyfriends friends house seriously
homeygirl411 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - oo ok then danng that was funny!
pupzNdogz Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - I've done the same thing except i said gode orange
JoBroLuvr42708 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - LOVED IT!!!
MrsNickJonas0207 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - lol paper walls...hah nick and sandy
MrsElric103 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - Paper walls. Bahaha xD
JOEJONAS94 Says:
Sep 8, 2008 - Kevin: Yeah, yeah. You're sleeping in the guest room, which is right next to mine. Two words: Paper Walls. So don't try me. Sandy: (Blushes) Yes sir. lol that was good, and when is the next!?!? plz tell me!!!
JessJediJonasCrazy Says:
Sep 8, 2008 - haha funny :D
hehalarious90 Says:
Sep 8, 2008 - omg this is episode was so awesome i love the papa kevin scolding it never gets old!! lol
missydrama96 Says:
Sep 7, 2008 - at the hospital where i live, say there is a fire, intead of the ppl saying "there is a fire, please stay in your rooms" over the intercom, they say "doctor red" and they say what wing its in. that happened when i was visiting my gramdma. i started laughing when i heard what they call the it.