Added: Jul 22, 2008
From: JonasBrothersLvr4Eva
Duration: 0:19
Dana grabbed Nick's hand and squeezed it so hard. The two his behind a wall. Nick: Dana, who are you talking about? Dana: JOHNNY!!! He's right THERE. Look!! Nick: (looks around the wall) I don't see him. What are you talking about? Dana: (comes to look) He's not there. He's gone. Where did he go?! Nick: He was never there! Dana: (holds onto him tighter) Nick, you have to believe me. He was there. Please keep him away from me. Nick: Why do you care so much if he's here. Dana: He did some things. BAD things to me and I can't tell you.... Nick: Dana, you can tell me anything, because I--(snaps back into reality) because I, uh...umm... Dana: You what? Nick: You can trust me. Dana: Nick, not yet. I just don't want to talk about it, not now, please. Nick: (hugs her) Okay, okay. Are you ready to go back with everyone else? Dana: (exhales) Yeah... Nick holds her hand lightly and they walk into the "Pink Dolphin" for breakfast. Joe: (eating bacon) Where were you? You're missing the buffet! Nick: Dana thought she....saw someone. Maria: Who? Dana: No one. It doesn't matter, he's gone now. Sarah: Come sit, you look terrified, like you've seen a ghost. Dana: Who I saw should be a ghost, right now. Kevin: (whispers) Nick, is she okay? Nick: (whispers) I'm not sure, but she's really scared. Kevin: Help her to relax and stay calm. Nick: (nods) Dana, you want some coffee? Dana: Uh, no, I'm good. Thanks. (forces a smile) Nick: Uh, do you want to go back to your room? Dana: Um, yeah, I think that's be good. Nick: Do you want me to walk you? Dana: Would you? Nick: Sure. Joe: You're gonna miss the buffet. Nick: I really don't care anymore. I'm not very hungry. (stands up and takes Dana's hand) Dana: Thanks Nick. Nick: Oh, it's no problem. Nick looked at the floor. Anywhere but Dana's big, innocent, beautiful brown eyes. He felt this weird feeling inside when he looked into her eyes. It made him feel somewhat good and somewhat like he wanted to throw up. All he knew was that he didn't want to leave her side right now and he was determined to make it stay like this. Dana swiped her key card and went inside, Nick followed. Dana sat on her bed and Nick sat on Sarah's. Dana: Nick, you've been so amazingly sweet to me. I really like you, a lot. Nick: Me too. I mean, I like YOU a lot, of course. Nick looked at the floor. How could he make a such a stupid mistake? He sounded so stupid in front of Dana! Dana: Are you okay? Nick looked up, startled. She was sitting next to him now. She took his clammy, sweaty hand in hers. Nick: Uh, yeah. I'm fine. Dana: You don't look fine. Nick: (tries to change the subject) Your room is bigger than ours. It's so huge. Dana: Nick, are you okay? Nick, seriously, answer me! Nick: Are YOU okay? Dana: Nick, please answer me. Nick: Yes, yes, I am fine!! I told you that already. Dana: (taken aback by his remark) Well, sorry.... Nick: No, wait. I'M sorry. I was mean. You just wanted an answer and I was being stubborn. Dana: What's wrong with your hand? It feels weird, and it's all wet. Nick: (takes his hand away quickly and dries it on his pants) Sorry (sticks his hand out again) Dana: (takes it and smiles at him) Nick: So, um, do you really think Johnny is here? Dana: Well, yeah, I mean, I swear I saw him. Nick: I believe you, it's just that....it's kind of hard to believe you when I didn't see him myself. Dana: I understand. Nick: But I bet he is here. But, he could just be vacationing. Suddenly the door burst open and Maria and Sarah came running in, with terrified looks on their faces, like THEY'VE seen ghosts. --------------------------------------- I will post the next chapter tomorrow morning IF my friend Maleek (WaterLover47) Gets at lest 50 subscribers. Only 40 more. I KNOW that I have way over 40 fans. PLEASE sub to him!! http://www.youtube.com/WaterLover47
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Rating: 5.00 (6 ratings) Views: 1366' favoriteCount='7 Comments: 28
nickjonas1234543210 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - im not trying to be pushy but this one was really good and please o please o please please with jb on top post the next one don tput me through this agony i want to find out wat they saw please o please
hannnahloveee Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - you should write a book or something. AMAZINGGG!
JonasGurl4Life4Ever Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - awesome!
x0brianna0x33 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - ah! plez make the nextt one soon!!
Jonascrazy678951 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - omg soooooooo good post the next 1 fast
peace1love1jonas Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - awesome!
manning2011 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - OhCrap!....
BellaClara99 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - more!!!!!!
jonaspiratelove Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - omg more!! amazing!
j0br0srcute Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - hey u rock in these stories try to read mine
dancechick2493 Says:
Jul 23, 2008 - i don't get why nick was so nervous!!
ilovjoejonas23 Says:
Jul 23, 2008 - hurry on the next one please:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xsingitoutx Says:
Jul 23, 2008 - i think he was about to tell her he loves her
Jonascrazy678951 Says:
Jul 23, 2008 - man i luv these
pinkpearl13 Says:
Jul 23, 2008 - they saw johnny too!! ahh get him away!! lol jk i loved it!!
fabulouslyloud Says:
Jul 24, 2008 - awesome
NLTluver14 Says:
Jul 24, 2008 - ther. now thers 50 subscribers. now mak chapter 28! please plz plzzzzz! i wana kno wht happens(:
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iluvbradyquinn10 Says:
Aug 15, 2008 - post more! post more!
kanama12 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - Ne, ne, geki dasa daze on the not posting the next episode thing T_T; All though I prefer to to get involved in matters like this, I really want to read the next chapter so... I shall contribute! [On the first day of school, I want an expensive watch put neatly in a box a note that says 'THANK YOU FOR SUBSCRIBING TO WATERLOVER47!' You should do that as a sign of thanks!] I'm just kidding. I talk out of my ass a lot. Dx ... xD;... Eh, it's still geki dasa daze though...