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Added: Jul 8, 2008

From: BurninUpwithuBaybeh

Duration: 0:55

So let's find out what happened to Ellyn! Here is chapter 12 hope you like it. Omg, I was so scared when it wasn't uploading! Thanks CrystleCutie!!! Setting-at the hospital, in the waiting room. Kevin, Olivia(Kevin's date), Nick, Joe and Lisa(Joe's date). It turns out that Ellyn had a major panic attack. The doctor said that she was gonna be fine, as long as she got some rest. Everyone had been in the waiting room for a while now. Joe: *pacing* Oh COME ON! How long does it take to sleep?! Kevin: Wow...just chill. They said she'd be alright. Joe: I'll believe it when I see it...*thinks back* Gah, that was the scariest thing ever, seeing her laying there like that... Olivia: Well what about poor Nick who had to SEE it happen? Everyone looks at Nick, who's sitting. He's got his elbows on his knees and he's looking at the ground, thinking. Nick: (In his mind) "Wake up. Please wake up..." Lisa: Joe calm DOWN.*yanks him down in the chair next to her* You need to take your mind off her for a bit...(wants to kiss) Joe: *looks at Lisa, but can't help think about Ellyn* Lisa:*leans in* The doctor comes to the waiting room. Doctor: You may see her now, she's awake. Joe: THANK THE LORD! Joe stands up and Lisa falls forward from her kiss attempt. Joe starts to run down the hall. Kevin: Joe WAIT. Joe: *rewinds(literally runs backwards), and pauses in the running position* What?! Kevin: Nick should be the first to see her... Olivia: I agree. Nick-go ahead in...NICK! Nick: *snaps out of it* Huh?? Lisa: Go in. Nick:..Go in where? Joe: The room. Nick: Why? Is she dead?! Kevin: She's awake... Nick: Oh. *extremely relieved, but still depressed* Nah... Joe: OKAY THEN. *zooms off to the room* Joe goes in the room and Ellyn's propped up on the bed. Ellyn: *tired* Hey J-uh oh... Joe comes charging at her. He gives her a big hug. Ellyn: Squishing..me..! Joe: Sorry. *loosens his hug a little, but doesn't let go* Joe is just standing there, bent over hugging her for a while. He finally lets go. He isn't focusing on anything but her. Ellyn:..Do you wanna have a seat?*points to a chair* Joe: Sure! *sits next to her on the bed* Ellyn: Or not... Joe: So what happened? Ellyn: I think the doctor already told you... Joe: No. I mean what caused you to- Someone knocks on the door. Lisa walks in. Lisa: *sees them together and turns a little sad* Oh, uh, sorry for interrupting. Joe, I'm gonna get going. Joe: Wait. *gets off the bed* Lisa, this is Ellyn. Ellyn, this is Lisa. Lisa: *looks down* Nice to meet you... Ellyn: *confused* You too... Maybe my accident hurt my memory because I don't remember seeing you... Lisa: I'm Joe's...I'm his... Joe: She's my girlfriend. I asked her tonight...*looks away* Ellyn: *slightly jealous and heartbroken* Oh... Lisa- how are you getting home? Lisa: Well it stopped raining, so I'm gonna walk... Ellyn: Okay, Joe will walk you home. *sad* Joe: I will?...I mean, I will. Ellyn, are you sure? Ellyn: Yeah, I'm good here. I'll talk to you..later. Lisa: Okay, thank you. Come on Joe. Joe and Lisa leave. A couple minutes later, Kevin walks in. Kevin: Hey Ellyn! *hugs her* Are you crying?? Ellyn: *quickly wipes away a tear* Hey Kev... Kevin: What's wrong? Ellyn: *sigh* Nothing...can you just take me home? The doctor walks in. Kevin: Doc, when is she allowed to leave? Doctor: I was just coming to tell you that you're allowed to leave anytime now. You can stay the night if you- Ellyn: We'll just get going! -They check out of the hospital. They are driving in the car. Nick and Ellyn haven't talked or made eye contact. They pull up to the apartment building. Ellyn: Oh my gosh! I completely forgot about Jenny! Olivia: Don't worry, she's home. We dropped them off here before we took you to the hospital(hint hint: the car door slamming and footsteps). Kevin: Nick- go get Frankie. Nick: No. Kevin: *eyes Olivia and coughs* Go get Frankie! Nick: Uh. Fine. Okay, not much of a cliff hanger... let's see what I can do- What is Ellyn gonna do now that Joe's taken? Move on? Does she like Nick? Why isn't Nick talking to her? And what's gonna happen when they go in the apartment building?! Hah! Lol, sorry had to. pLeAsE cOmMeNt! Thanks! P.S.- I promise the next chapter will be more.. intense.

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Tags: brothers  burnin'  chapter  drama  hotties  jobromance  jobros  joe  jonas  jonasbrothersmusic  kevin  love  nick  story  twelve  up 


Rating: 5.00 (3 ratings)    Views: 596' favoriteCount='4    Comments: 17

Hillary104 Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - thanks for posting it *STARTING TO READ!!* =]

CrystleCutie Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - Yay u got it working!

BurninUpwithuBaybeh Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - Thanks to you! =D

CrystleCutie Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - ooh I can't wait until the next chapter.. More Intense!! I can't wait!

CrystleCutie Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - Really? Awesome!

jennilyn66 Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - i thought it was intense...well i guess i find everything scary...oh well...so when's the next?

BurninUpwithuBaybeh Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - Probably tomorrow! =]

BurninUpwithuBaybeh Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - Guys this is random, but, My brother was playing guitar Then he threw a broken string at me And it whipped my leg and it KILLED! So, If you ever meet the Jonas Brothers, DON'T let them throw guitar strings at you! This has been a helpful tip from Ellyn. =D

jennilyn66 Says:

Jul 8, 2008 - fine...i guess i can wait!

AngieCourt202 Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - ok wow, like nnick and ellyn need to get together lol

talkaholic132 Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - lisa seems like such an interesting character...

gaby21693 Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - more please i love ur series!!

THEkissesHEARTsarah Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - you have to post the next one really soon !!!!

MrsAlexaMariaJonas Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - nick and ellyn!!! love it!

jonaslover33333 Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - i love this chapter joes so funny in it and its probably wat he would do in real life more plz!!! :)

folis264 Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - can't wait. Love it... Ellyn and Nick HAVE to get together :)

MrsAriJonas Says:

Jul 9, 2008 - omg love all the chapters!! pleez pleez pleez add more!!!! i beg you!!!! lol!!!

CrystleCutie Says:

Jul 17, 2008 - lol Thank you for the helpful Tip!

TheeOnlyyMrssJonasss Says:

Jul 24, 2008 - Joe: *rewinds(literally runs backwards), and pauses in the running position* What?! Ahahah i could just see him doing that:D

jonasbrotherslvr1131 Says:

Aug 16, 2008 - haha it wouldnt let me comment on the last chapter cuz youtubes retarded. haha i can TOTALY say dramatic. dra-mat-ic. aha. im sooo smart. :) luv ittttt