Added: Jul 20, 2008
From: mysterypolice
Duration: 1:27
Darkness. Total darkness police Sergeant Roger McCormick sees. He was sent out to see a party that was disturbing the peace at 1:00 AM. People also heard very faint screams coming from the party. When he came to the party, teens were fleeing the scene. But they had worried and disgusted faces on them when they were fleeing. He thought something was wrong and quickly made to the front door where the party was held. Once he entered he was knocked out. Finally, he wakes up and can feel the bump on his head literally weighing him down. He gets up trying to remember what happened before he was hit on the head. He hears movement in the dark kitchen. He grabs his flashlight and shines it in the kitchen but nothing is there. He hears a low ungodly moan. Something is upstairs, watching him. He drops his flashlight. The batteries in it go out. He squints up into the stairs and can see a pair of white glowing eyes getting bigger and bigger. That means that whatever is up there is coming closer. He stumbles back and falls. From out of the darkness comes a man that looks like he has been in a fight for an hour. His entire body is covered in dark red blood. Roger McCormick quickly gets up to try and help the man but the victim snaps at him. Roger tries to calm the victim down by saying "Whoa! Calm down buddy!" The victim gets close enough to Roger that he tackles him, snapping at Roger angrily. Roger manages to get away from the man and pushes him to the floor. While the man is trying to get up he hears somebody else from outside the house. A man that used to work at the local store finds Roger and comes toward him and says "P-p-please h-help me, I was trying to help a woman down the street and she bit me and then I just took off and now I can't stop the bleeding. Please hel-." But that's all he has to say before the victim that was trying to attack Roger, attacks the cashier from the store. The cashier cries out in pain as the other man bites him in the neck. Blood comes gushing out of the cashier's throat. He tries to cover up the gaping wound in his neck but he falls on the floor in a heap. The other man takes several bites out of the cashier, looks up at Roger and slowly comes toward him. Roger quickly pulls out his .44 Magnum and yells "Stay right there mister and don't move... I said DON'T MOVE! If you come any closer I'm going to have to shoot." The man doesn't respond but slowly makes his way toward Roger. Before the man gets any closer Roger shoots a round into his leg. Paranoid, Roger shoots him again in the knee cap. The man drops to his knees but still tries to come toward Roger. Roger is frantic and shoots the man in the chest, but still the man is coming toward Roger. Finally, Roger shoots him in the head and the dead body comes down in a split second due to the powerful gun. "How was he still standing? I shot him 3 times and he was still standing. The .44 Magnum is proven to be the world's most powerful hand gun and how was he still standing," Roger mumbles to himself. At the corner of his eye Roger sees 2 more people that looked like the man before coming out of the darkness. Roger quickly gets up and makes his way outside. Roger sees the cop car overturned but he is distracted by the 2 moans coming from inside the house. Roger looks to see if anybody is around but is shocked at the sight of the entire neighborhood is in ruins. He is also aroused that it is daylight. Roger quickly runs down the street with thoughts racing in his mind. Some of the thoughts are: I've heard of the rumors of 2012 but none like this, Why didn't that man go down when I shot him in the leg. Why did that man take bites out of a cashier from a store.
Channel: Entertainment
Tags: billy brawl bro. dead eric halo idol king mario melee nylund rebel spiderman stephen stpry super the walking yell zombie
Rating: 3.67 (3 ratings) Views: 373' favoriteCount='1 Comments: 16
X360videos Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - The netherlands kill those pigs.(don't kill me)
RonzilWeazleBack Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - what about like remaking Escape from new york, but all the convicts have turned into zombys
Auphschhka Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - maybe a mental asylum,cos they're already kinda spooky. maybe u could have the patients like eat the zombies,while the zombies eat THEM,or like have them like mitate the zombies,so the police dnt know who t shoot,and everything gets all fucked up n confused. or maybe thats too confusing??
PlasmaDude47 Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - I'd say a police station:)
ScirishProduction Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - how about a gas station. Make a fairly big group of people stuck in there. could lead to some major claustrophobia.
gamers15 Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - i was thinking of making the same thing yesterday,but with flash CS3,kind of like i a legend but nobody is missing.so a place i would say is a gas station.... a car pulls up,asks for gas,and nobody is there,then all of a sudden you can see a glympse of the zombie dude and a black screen with screaming :)
Schloonktapooxis Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - Is it with stick figures.
gamers15 Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - Of course ^_^
Schloonktapooxis Says:
Jul 21, 2008 - *sigh* make it with sprites and then make it full-motion video and then with actual dudes
gamers15 Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - why?
Schloonktapooxis Says:
Jul 22, 2008 - stick animation is pretty basic, it's kind of like the half-way point to making a good animation with full bodies
sistersoh Says:
Jul 24, 2008 - Wow! cool story =D you really are a professional writer ^^ I can't wait to read the whole thing =) you know the story is a little bit similar to a game called " Resident Evil 2 " In this game the story takes place in a police station, well if you need more help in your story read about the game trust me you'll get the help you need
sistersoh Says:
Jul 24, 2008 - Well since the hero is a cup I suggest you make the story takes place in a police station just like Resident Evil XD or maybe at a company building. you make the hero have his adventure in the street untill he gets to this company. lol WTH I'm totaly influenced by horror games XD well it's just a suggestion, I hope it helps ;)
sistersoh Says:
Jul 24, 2008 - You know if your story got famous maybe lots of video games companies will contact you & asks to buy your story to make a game about it lol really ^^ good luck
mysterypolice Says:
Jul 25, 2008 - i have the novelization of Resident Evil 2 and 0 and 1 by S.D. Perry.
mysterypolice Says:
Jul 25, 2008 - sooo yeah i can basically look through the book, thanks for the tip though!
gamer91402 Says:
Aug 12, 2008 - How about a hospital....
pivotstickman Says:
Jul 20, 2008 - I think a guy should be in a dark ally and get attacked by a homeless guy and the homeless guy takes his change and he finds a 5 bucks in his pocket so he buys a 5 doller foot long at subway... but then he wants bacon on his sanwich but they tell him it cost 50 cents extra so the homeless guys like is totally pissed now so he pulls out a knife and slits the... sandwich in half an settles not to have bacon THE END "Oringinal screen play by pivotstickman"